SBF 70 years logo
MenuMENU
SearchSEARCH

Don’t loose out

As an editor, I’m expected to be perfect at grammar, syntax, punctuation, spelling and usage. Well, I’m not.

by Steve Hirano, Editor/Associate Publisher
October 1, 2006
4 min to read


As an editor, I’m expected to be perfect at grammar, syntax, punctuation, spelling and usage. Well, I’m not. In fact, I just looked up “syntax” in the dictionary to find out what it means. Here’s the definition: “the way in which linguistic elements are put together to form constituents.” Hmm. . . I’m still not sure what it means.

As an example of my imperfection, I once wrote “sight” when I meant “site” — or vice versa — and one of our more eagle-eyed (and sadistic) readers ripped the page from the magazine, circled the word in red ink and anonymously mailed the page to the office. I was, of course, mortified and showed the page to several of my colleagues. I was hoping just one of them would say, “Yeah, I’ve made that same mistake before. No big deal.” None of them did.

Ad Loading...

It is a big deal, really. An editor making that type of mistake is equivalent to a route supervisor placing a bus stop along a dangerous curve. The editor’s error doesn’t put children at physical risk, but it’s a sign that he or she isn’t paying attention to details. We all take pride in our work. Maintaining a high standard is a matter of professionalism. It’s also an effective way to challenge yourself to do your best work at all times.

How’s your writing?
But editors aren’t the only ones who are judged by their ability to string words together in a meaningful fashion. You are, too. A pupil transportation professional’s writing skills are on display more than ever before because of the increasingly common use of e-mail. Many conversations that used to take place over the phone are now being held via e-mail.

For those of you who are strong writers, this focus on the written word is not a problem. For the rest of you, responding to e-mail, writing reports or even filling out employee evaluations can be a struggle. More than that, an inability to communicate effectively with the written word can hurt your reputation and sabotage your career aspirations.

That’s why it’s important for you to be aware of your written communication skills and, if necessary, to improve them. To help in a small way, I offer the following tips, which are taken from a presentation on effective writing that I did a couple of years ago at the National Association for Pupil Transportation conference.

 

  • Before you start writing, know what you want to say. If necessary, prepare an outline with the main points that you’re going to make.

     

Ad Loading...
  • Focus on clarity, simplicity and brevity. Long sentences filled with three-syllable words may sound impressive, but they can be difficult to read and understand.

     

  • Understand who your audience is and craft your message accordingly. A quick note to a colleague about a meeting that’s been rescheduled will not need to be nearly as formal as a letter to a site administrator about dangerous traffic patterns around his or her school.

     

  • Always have someone else proofread anything you’ve written that needs to be clean and precise. No matter how good a writer you are, you should not try to proof your own copy.

     

  • Avoid common errors that plague even the best writers. “It’s” is not possessive, even though it has an apostrophe. It means, “It is.” To remember, think of “its” (the possessive form) as being like “his.” Another common error: It’s “lose,” not “loose,” when you misplace your glasses or fail to win (see headline).

     

    I haven’t forgotten buses
    You thought this column was supposed to be about school buses, didn’t you? Well, here’s my advice in that regard: In the U.S., it’s “buses” when you’re talking about big vehicles that transport lots of people and “busses” when you’re talking about kissing your sister or, better yet, someone you’re not related to (or should that be “to whom you’re not related?”)

    Finally, don’t procrastinate. When you have to put something in writing, take care of it right away. Putting it off only increases your chances of an error. I speak from experience here.

Topics:Management
Subscribe to Our Newsletter

More Management

Headshots of Shelby Noakes, Rob Consoli, Rachel Trindade, and Michael Chase featured in a Zonar leadership update graphic from School Bus Fleet.
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 11, 2026

Zonar Announces New Executive Leadership Appointments

After a recent merger and another acquisition, Zonar looks to the future with its four new executive team leads.

Read More →
Graphic promoting Kajeet Connected Communities, a program offering managed internet connectivity solutions for schools, libraries and nonprofits to support digital access initiatives.
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 11, 2026

Kajeet Launches Low-Cost Internet Program for Schools and Buses

In the wake of federal funding cuts to the e-rate program and on-board WiFi, Kajeet offers a new option for Internet connectivity where it matters most for students.

Read More →
Graphic announcing Forest River Bus & Van’s 2025 Top Dealer awards alongside a plaque recognizing The Bus Center as a Top 4 Dealer of the Year for sales performance and customer service.
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 10, 2026

The Bus Center Named a 2025 Top 4 Forest River Dealer

The Bus Center was named a Top 4 Dealer for Forest River Bus & Van for 2025, marking its second consecutive year receiving recognition from the manufacturer.

Read More →
Ad Loading...
Model 1 Commercial Vehicles facility in Elgin, Illinois with a lineup of commercial vans and shuttle buses parked outside the dealership and service center supporting fleet customers in the Chicago area.
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 9, 2026

Model1 Opens New Illinois Location, Joins Sourcewell

The dealership's new Elgin location will serve commercial fleets across the Chicago area.

Read More →
a photo of a row of school buses parked and text boxes overlaid that read "two new district installs" with the transfinder logo
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 6, 2026

Two Midwest Districts Turn to Transfinder

Two separate school districts in Illinois and Ohio have rolled out Transfinder's Routefinder and Tripfinder solutions, respectively.

Read More →
An orange, white, and red graphic with an image of buses lined up in white/red duotone and text reading "How GPS Helps Buses Stay On-Time."
ManagementMarch 6, 2026

How GPS Tracking Helps School Bus Fleets Improve On-Time Performance Without Adding Routes

Struggling with late buses? GPS data can help fleets cut delays, fix route bottlenecks, and improve on-time performance without adding routes.

Read More →
Ad Loading...
Black Zonar V4 telematics device shown on an orange background, a rectangular fleet telematics unit with status indicator lights and connection ports used in commercial vehicles to collect operational and emissions data.
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 5, 2026

Zonar Becomes First CARB-Approved OEM Telematics Provider

Zonar received CARB certification allowing fleets with factory-installed V4 telematics devices to automatically submit emissions data for Clean Truck Check compliance.

Read More →
professional headshot of kris laseter against a gradient orange background, the pathwise logo, and text that says "leadership update"
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 5, 2026

Pathwise Promotes Kris Laseter to President and COO

As the software company caps a year of record growth, the promotion recognizes Laseter's impact with doubled revenue and two large district partnerships.

Read More →
An orange and yellow graphic with an EverDriven logo and text reading "updated VIP App With Real-Time Student Transportation Tracking."
Managementby News/Media ReleaseMarch 4, 2026

EverDriven Updates VIP App With Real-Time Student Transportation Tracking

The redesigned app gives parents and school districts real-time trip tracking, multilingual access, and improved communication tools.

Read More →
Ad Loading...
A colorful graphic with 4 portraits and text reading "4 Women to Watch in School Transportation."
Managementby Elora HaynesMarch 4, 2026

4 Women Leading School Transportation Forward

Careers aren’t linear. Neither is progress. These women share what it really takes to lead in school transportation.

Read More →